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You
By: Geena

I think about you day and night.
It's anything but a fight.
You'll take me up in your arms,
And pull me close to your chest.
I'm pretty sure you get the rest.
The desire of being with you
And pain when I am without you
Is overwhelming.
You are the skip to my step,
And the beat to my heart.
As you might spot a mile away,
I can love you in any way.

Ask
By: Geena

As time ticks by,
Or maybe tocks.
I think about your short black locks.
When?
How?
Where?
Why?
These are the questions I ask
While looking into your eyes.

Enchanting
By: Geena

Your voice can charm a deadly cobra.
Your eyes can melt the sun.
Your smell is overwhelming.
Your touch is irresistible.
Everything about you is perfect.
You are more than that.
You are enchanting.

Want
By: Geena

I want to hear you.
I want to see you.
I want to touch you,
Smell you,
Taste you...
I want you so bad.
I can't handle being without such beauty.
You complete my soul.
I want you to be with me...
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LiverFire29 Sep 20103comments
Comments (3)
  • Desiringyou 27 Desiringyouyou - 8/10

    your rhyming needs to be in the same places but it is very emotional

    some grammar mistakes contained but nice description

    instead of 3rd line try somehing like...

    I feel braver when I'm in your arms
    and you hug me to your chest

    im pretty sure you get the rest sort of ruins the romantic feel, try something like...

    You are the very best

    I wrote one, see...

    I look into your deep blue eyes
    Even when I'm petrified
    I would risk my life for you

    I seem to find the way you act
    Like a magnet making me attract
    What do I have to do

    I would travel the world to hear you speak
    That deep toned voice makes me in love heaps

    When it's raining we huddle together
    You give me a red rose

    Make me make you say forever
    We'll be together, you'd never me go
    When I'm crying out my heart to you
    You listen take in emotion
    And when I'm confused, don't know what to do
    Your kisses are the magical potion

    You make me feel like a petal from a flower
    thinking bout you every minute of every hour
    And when I need a little bit of assistance
    You come so far no matter distance

    And give me another reason
    To love you more then I do (echoes second time)
    You know I love you

    They are so powerful words
    And when you said the to me
    My heart skipped 1 billion beats
    Suddenly I was free

    I want to hear it again
    Want to see your lips move
    I want to hold your soft hand
    Wanna spend time with you
    I want to taste your sweet cherry lips
    And pull my hand through your soft hair
    I wanna be with you, nobody else
    It really matters to me that I know you care

    Time passes
    People change
    But we know nothing will happen
    we will stay the same, all the way

    When you ask me a question
    The answers always in my heart
    And when we rarely fight
    We just restart

    Your a charm
    With sexy arms
    Your eyes are crystal clear blue.
    Your smell is sweet.
    It starts to heat between me and you
    Your touch is irresistible. (your line)
    Your as perfect as can be.
    Practically a wizard, who has enchanted me.

    Instead of saying what he is try puttng in a little bit of how you feel (person speaking)

    for example: instead of anything but a fight try something like this love is worth the fight
    Reply
  • Desiringyou 27 DesiringyouI look into your deep blue eyes
    Even when I'm petrified
    I would risk my life for you

    I seem to find the way you act
    Like a magnet making me attract
    What do I have to do

    I would travel the world to hear you speak
    That deep toned voice makes me in love heaps

    When it's raining we huddle together
    You give me a red rose, make it all better

    Then I say that forever
    We'll be together, you'd never let me go, no,no,no.

    When I'm crying out my heart to you
    You listen take in emotion
    And when I'm confused, don't know what to do
    Your kisses are the magical potion

    You make me feel like a petal from a flower
    thinking bout you every minute of every hour
    And when I need a little bit of assistance
    You come so far no matter distance

    And give me another reason
    To love you more then I do (echoes second time)
    You know I love you

    They are so powerful words
    And when you said the to me
    My heart skipped 1 billion beats
    Suddenly I was free

    I want to hear it again
    Want to see your lips move
    I want to hold your soft hand
    Wanna spend time with you
    I want to taste your sweet cherry lips
    And pull my hand through your soft hair
    I wanna be with you, nobody else
    It really matters to me that I know you care

    Time passes
    People change
    But we know nothing will happen
    we will stay the same, all the way

    When you ask me a question
    The answers always in my heart
    And when we rarely fight
    We just restart

    Your a charm
    With sexy arms
    Your eyes are crystal clear blue.
    Your smell is sweet.
    It starts to heat between me and you
    Your touch is irresistible. (your line)
    Your as perfect as can be.
    Practically a wizard, who has enchanted me.
    Reply
  • LiverFire 0 LiverFireI am not a rhyming poet. I can't tell you how it goes, because these are my dreams I have set out. We aren't actually going out, so I'm not sure how to describe it. 😛Reply
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