I created this poem tell me if its good or not because I am thinking of entering it in a school competition.

I am a broken doll
Full of Misery
Only one special person
Could do this to me

I weep
My feelings hurt
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

Full of holes
With an empty felling within
A part of me gone
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

No-one can see me
I've just dissapeared
No-one cares I'm gone
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I sit here all alone
Thinking
Thinking I'm not wanted
Maybe, Perhaps
Someone can fix me
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

Deep inside
within me I know
Only them
Can save me now
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I feel so far away
In a dream land
With my own way
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I am a broken doll
It goes without saying
No friends
Sad
Lonely
And definitely
Full of misery

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