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dreamybanana
Corrupt
(Meant to be read slowly)

Alone. But I have
myself, my thoughts - me
Just five minutes deep
pure inside my anatomy

How I wish it ends,
is this insanity? Vain,
dirt that poisons my words
Spins my actions. Tame.

Obeying more than being,
Seeing more than making.
I can choose, but cannot
without her endless taking.

I can no longer hurt you
Limited but still you blame
me? No one can argue. Corrupt -
We're never being the same.
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dreamybanana1 Jun 20098comments
Comments (8)
  • FreakOnTheWeb 0 FreakOnTheWebAwesome poem (: I really like it 😆 xx
  • cellima 0 cellimaThat is really good, I have no gift whatsoever for poetry, so I might not be qualified to rate, but I'd say this is one of the better things I'v seen in a while.
  • theperson34 0 theperson34Fantastic!!
  • Anun 0 AnunWow, this is really great. It actually drew me in more than most published poems do. Keep up the good work. :]
  • roadlesstraveled 0 roadlesstraveledLove it!
  • Wilkinsons1 0 Wilkinsons1i posted onto the last blog i really love your writing some day we could be writing buds or something hehe! i would love to post my work and poems onto marapets and when i get a bit older ( i am 15 )i will just MM me if you would like help on writing if i do become a writer i would love to make a website with the latest books i have written ( when i was about ten i worte a story about 98 pages all by hand , (The title was: A love like mine ) i was only ten so i didnt know a really gd title and thought it was gd at the time anyways can you give me ideas on some titles anyone xx THX
  • Fantasticbeauty 0 FantasticbeautyWork of an absolute genius!
  • 0 1RedKolaMy words exactly Fantasticbeauty. Took the words out of my moth, great work.
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