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I will be adding more whenever I feel like writing one. For now there is only a few, but please critique them if you wish. I am up for any input, just if you really don't like them don't trash talk me down; These are my poems, and I really don't care if you dislike them. happy.gif



When the sun rises
I know you're there for me,
Waiting for me to wake
My heart to beat for yours to take,
Our bright orbs glancing to meet
Love travels from my head to my feet,
When I'm alone
I truely know my love for you has grown,
For when you're gone away
I can barely make myself stay,
You're the one I long for
To be with you forever and more.

~Velocity


My heart belongs to the sea,
He is my soul
My song and my stride,
With every step I take
I print it on the sand,
Waves lapping at my feet,
It's fierce slap across another
A melody in my own acord,
For another to take this away
I shall lose part of my being,
A portion that holds my life in its palms.


With every step
I can feel my rapid breath pushing me on,
With every dodge
I feel my opponent's presence,
With every fall
I know everyone is watching
And with every goal
I wait for the crowd to roar,
Intensity is key
But is nothing without teamwork.

~Views of a soccer player
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lupepup161616 May 20094comments
Comments (4)
  • cynicale 0 cynicalelove them
  • maddyodotcom 0 maddyodotcomwow. ❤️ them
  • lupepup1616 0 lupepup1616Thanks. I just make them off the top of my head whenever I feel poetic.
  • pigpot 0 pigpotthey are great
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