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dreamybanana
If you are then post here, like a little writing community where I could read your work and you could read mine.

I'll try to review at least one blog per person, but what would be really great is that we could all review each others.

It's a big dream for a small blog girl but lets see what happens.

Feel free to post anything here.thumbsup.gif
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dreamybanana11 May 200940comments
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  • Xgirl1234 0 Xgirl1234I will become an author named Lizbeth Irma Zelda.mm me for more stories. also view my blog. Chapter 1 "Hey, LIZ, you free Friday?" Sam, the nicest guy in school asked. "Maybe. I might be. Lemme ask Lila," I grinned. Everyone knew lila was like my personal assistant. "Where is she? Did she find someone else to pester? You're never without her, Sam smiled. As if on cue, Lila appeared. "You best not be going out with Sam," Lila sniffed. "Why, I'm not free Friday?" I giggled. For the rest of the story, read Sam-Chapter 1
  • Tanners 0 TannersVoynich Ms (Voynich Manuscript) Prologue (Part 1) A small flicker of light pushed through the paned glass window, momentarily lighting up a small figure hunched over a desk of highly polished steel. The figure worked by the light of a small lamp positioned carefully on the desk so it pointed directly at the manuscript that lay before him. He held his tweezers between his thumb and fore-finger, using it to turn the pages. He took great caution in doing so, in fear her might tear one of the aged pages. His heavy breathing filled the room, almost blocking out the rhythmic splatter of rain on the window. He massaged his temples with his ungloved hand, the other resting on the hard plastic cover the manuscript had been delivered in. The young scientist glanced at the window, tempted to open it to allow the cool night breeze into the stuffy room. Loud footsteps echoed down the corridor, unheard by the scientist making there way toward the large steel door of the lab. The quiet chinking of keys could that could be heard followed by the loud click as the door was unlocked, the sound easily mistaken for a particularly large drop of rain hitting the wooden frame of the window. The door swung silently open, and a tall figure entered the room his steel-capped boots hitting the floor loudly as he walked. The man previously huddled over the desk spun quickly around, surprised by the sudden entrance. The two men glared at one and other, not speaking a word. The young man opened his mouth to speak as something deep inside stirred at the sight of the man. A sharp blade slipped between his ribs as he looked up, his face softening as he recognized the figure. He fell to the floor, gasping softly as the blood stained his crisp white coat. The scientist narrowed his blood-shot eyes as he focused on the ceiling, not noticing as the figure left the room locking the door behind him. Panic filled his eyes as fear began to take over. Its over. The book still lay open at the page he had been decoding; his notes now lay scattered around his body soaking up the dark blood forming a puddle around his cold body. Note: Stealers - look at my profile and look at my threats for if you disturb me. The same rules go for stealing.
  • Hawkear 0 HawkearHmm... Would you like to help me write a random boredom chapter? It involves romance, fighting, pain, death, etc
  • butterflygirl458 0 butterflygirl458I like to write but I really suck at it.
  • godschild22222 0 godschild22222I enjoy writing. Rate this piece? "I've been missing out my whole life." He stared into her eyes. Her expression changed from wondering to confused. He ran a hand threw his hair, looking down. "Why?" She asked. That was one thing he loved about her, she never asked who or when, people or places. she just gave you the advise to get you through the obsticle. "Because....because im afraid that when i get to the place i wanna be, it wont be like i pictured it." he said with an intence look on his face. "There is only one thing i can tell you." she smiled. She hooked her thumbs in her middle side belt hoops. She straightened her posture which stuck her chest out a little. She leaned into him, stopping near his ear. her cold breath sent shivers up his spine. "You'll never know if you don't try." She whispered. She pulled her head back a little until she was staring into his eyes, searching. After what seemed like forever she sighed and turned her back to him. She shook her head and she walked away from him. The worst part? He let her.
  • playfulkittencat 15 playfulkittencatWhat is Life? Why do we Battle To Live another Day Why do we Care When others are Hurt Why does the Pain Flow like Rivers Through my Soul Is it possible for me to be Saved From this world of Hurt Have I Surrendered To give up this Chase If so Why am I Still Wishing Things would Change? What is Love? Why is it the most Harsh In times of Need Why do those Words, I Love You, Peirce me like Blades Why is what Should Make someone Happy Make Me Cry? What is Pain Why does it Hurt So Badly? Why does it cover me like Fog? Why does it follow Me? Make me feel so Alone? Is it just Me? Or is it something else? I think as the Tears Come out like Blood ----- Just a scary peom song{without choras} thing that discribes how i felt when I was 9-14
  • dreamybanana 0 dreamybananaSorry I have had no time to review but keep posting. Mm me f ou really want a review off me, I have read most of them just the thoughts haven't been typed up. THX
  • Fezzem 0 Fezzemyo. imma writer. but i don't post my works here. sawry. =\
  • priya1sneha 2 priya1snehayep im a writer. planning to open a writing club or something ill see about it later. anyways, i am currently writing a chapter book and i deleted all my other stories cause i just didn't like them. Though I have made a book before. i will let you see my work once i'm done. just please don't steal it!
  • roadlesstraveled 0 roadlesstraveledI am a writer. Check out my blog!!
  • Cherripie 0 CherripieI'd love if you could take a look at my latest blog when you've got the time, and I'll be back soon to take a browse through the others who have posted here. ^-^ Mine's just a short piece, set in the future and was written for a piece of English homework. I'd love some opinions on it. =D
  • Royalbunni 0 RoyalbunniI have written half of a novel but your work is so good, I don't want to seem really bad.
  • ringo 48 ringoI'm a writer I would love to post my latest book I am writing here but you said no more than 700 words. I'll mm you it, and if anyone else wants to read it, feel free to mm me also.
  • MiyuMiyu 15 MiyuMiyuI've dabbled with a pen once or twice ^__^ I prefer to stick to short stories myself. Everytime I attempt to start a novel I get sidetracked before the tenth page. Shorter work is much easier to plot out and hold my attention ❤️ Perhaps if I can find anything worth drudging up on my laptop I'll post it.
  • koolkat101love 0 koolkat101loveI am a writer with a private writer and graphic artist club. It is called Writing Is... If you would like an invite then mm me. It is brand-new too.
  • hollychocc 0 hollychoccI have written something but it is a bit long to post here. If you want to read it please visit my site at www.writersdistrict.webs.com - its not the best site in the world, but it does its job okay =)
  • Roxy4Ever118 0 Roxy4Ever118Posted by: hollychocc - 6th Jan 12:53 PM [ONLINE] [Delete] I have written something but it is a bit long to post here. If you want to read it please visit my site at www.writersdistrict.webs.com - its not the best site in the world, but it does its job okay =)
  • Roxy4Ever118 0 Roxy4Ever118Posted by: Roxy4Ever118 - 23rd Jan 11:30 AM [ONLINE] [Delete] Posted by: hollychocc - 6th Jan 12:53 PM [ONLINE] [Delete] I have written something but it is a bit long to post here. If you want to read it please visit my site at www.writersdistrict.webs.com - its not the best site in the world, but it does its job okay =) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posted by: hollychocc - 6th Jan 12:53 PM [ONLINE] [Delete] I have written something but it is a bit long to post here. If you want to read it please visit my site at www.writersdistrict.webs.com - its not the best site in the world, but it does its job okay =) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posted by: koolkat101love - 5th Jan 11:12 PM [OFFLINE] [Delete] I am a writer with a private writer and graphic artist club. It is called Writing Is... If you would like an invite then mm me. It is brand-new too. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posted by: MiyuMiyu - 1st Jan 11:08 PM [OFFLINE] [Delete] I've dabbled with a pen once or twice ^__^ I prefer to stick to short stories myself. Everytime I attempt to start a novel I get sidetracked before the tenth page. Shorter work is much easier to plot out and hold my attention ❤️ Perhaps if I can find anything worth drudging up on my laptop I'll post it. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posted by: Cheeringfaithfully65 - 13th Dec 07:06 PM [OFFLINE] [Delete] I'm a writer I would love to post my latest book I am writing here but you said no more than 700 words. I'll mm you it, and if anyone else wants to read it, feel free to mm me also. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posted by: Royalbunni - 6th Dec 07:36 PM [ONLINE] [Delete] I have written half of a novel but your work is so good, I don't want to seem really bad.
  • athenagarabian 0 athenagarabiani tore up all my stories and poems...
  • TSH666 0 TSH666I'm a writer, and you know me, banana. I'm working on my current Secret Works (no, that is not the title) book, and I have a Writers' club where we give out competitions and advice.
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