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hisgothiclove1
I wrote this myself. It is called Falling Short Rate it? thanx...




(Can you stop this chaos?)
(You can't stop this chaos)
(Please say the words)
(Please)

Please, Please forget me,
I won't be back again.
Maybe one morning you'll wake up, and to your conscience you'll say,
There is something wrong.

You won't miss me that I do know.
You should've forgotten me long ago.
Am I just that selfish?
Am I just too paranoid?

Isn't something wrong?
Is there something wrong with me?...

Even though you're the sacrifice,
You won't try to hold me, not now.
Though I'd die for you to love me,
I'd still be alone.

Is there something wrong with me?...

(Can you stop this chaos?)
(Please stop this chaos)
(Please say the words)
(Please)

Please, Please forget me,
I won't be back again.
You don't know what I do to myself.
I sleep deeper and deeper and cry out.

Isn't something wrong?
Is there something wrong with me?

Even though you're sacrifice,
You won't try to love me, not ever.
Though I'd die for you to hold me,
I'll still be alone.

Is there something wrong with me?

If I cry, I'll cry knowing you don't care.
If I dream just to sleep, I'll wake without you there.
Isn't something wrong?
Is there something?

Even though you're the sacrifice,
You won't hold me, not now.
Though I'd die for you to Hold me,
I'll still be alone.

Isn't something wrong?...
Is there something wrong with me?...

(You can't stop this chaos)
(You can't stop this chaos.)
(You didn't say the words)

(Please)

Comments (6)
  • HottChix 0 HottChixum...wow... 9.9/10 Some of the sentance structure could use some work other than that...holy crap is all I can say!
  • hisgothiclove1 0 hisgothiclove1ok thanx! :]
  • Mystici 0 MysticiHOLEH! YOUR FRIGGEN AWESOME! -huggles- 1000000000000000000/10
  • PrinseszKathy 0 PrinseszKathy8/10 - The structure and length of some of the sentences are a bit off, but otherwise, really well.
  • Mystici 0 Mystici1000000000000000000/10
  • cynicale 0 cynicale100000000000/10 i loved it
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