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gigglemagic
Please comment on this, and DON'T STEAL THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!




*my heart begins to race
when i see your handsome face
you sit beside me
As we stare out to the beautiful sea
when we sat under the moonlight
it was such a pretty sight
i began to feel like time was slowly coming to a stop
when I looked into his eyes under the stars, my heart dropped

My stomach began to fill with butterflies
I glanced up to the starry night sky
please feel the way i do
I am so crazy about you
I just wish you could see
How much you mean to me!
When I hear your voice
My body fills with rejoice
your hand in mine
I swear I could hear chimes
when we danced I never wanted it to end
even if the song stopped the music still played in my head
I never want to leave the dance floor
because no matter the beat of the song i wanted to dance with you more



I wish you knew
how my feelings are true
do you feel the same
if not then leave the game
when we danced my heart melts
gigglemagic0
gigglemagic20 Oct 200819comments
Comments (19)
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagicPlease leave commentsReply
  • shakira202 0 shakira202That was Awesome!!!!Reply
  • 0 Kury22986That's a great poem. You must love writing poems, right?Reply
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagicYes I love writing poems, stories, or songsReply
  • Intoxicate 15 IntoxicateThat's SO AWESOME!!!
    Well Done!!!!!
    Reply
  • BillabongPrincess18 0 BillabongPrincess18Wow Giggles that great, Well Done!!!!!Reply
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagicThank you!Reply
  • swimchic12 0 swimchic12thats sooo sweat! i luv it!Reply
  • Bluestar174 0 Bluestar174Its great!Reply
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagicthanks you guysReply
  • roxygurl345 0 roxygurl345its niceReply
  • 0 Jamica236This is greatReply
  • Kelly11377 0 Kelly11377that poem made no sense waht-so-ever! no offense ur still coolReply
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagichow does it not make sense, it's basically saying, I'm falling head over heals for this guyReply
  • SuperRich1 0 SuperRich1i love itReply
  • fasoro1992 0 fasoro1992I love it keep wrighting more poemsReply
  • 0 cuitykitty111cooolReply
  • lilkat 0 lilkatyeah its right in the middle
    u need more passion
    its good wit wat it has but not all of it
    u need more gold in it
    dats how i got my poem"Tullip"
    Reply
  • MusicLver4Ever 0 MusicLver4EverThat's sweet.Reply
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