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laurenisdebest
Mans best friendlaurenisdebest 11
a dog sits waiting
in the hot midday sun
too faithful to leave
too frightened to run

he???s been there for days now
with nothing to do
but sit by the road
just waiting for you

he can???t understand
why you left him that day
he thought you were stopping
to take him to play

he???s sure you???ll come back
and that???s why he stays
how long can he suffer?
how many more days?

his legs have grown weak
his throat???s parched and dry
he???s sick now from hunger
he falls with a sigh

he lays down his head
and closes his eyes
i wish you could see
how a waiting dog dies

PLEASE TREAT ANIMALS KINDLY
laurenisdebest0
 laurenisdebest1 Oct 200811comments
Comments (11)
  • lovesick17 0 lovesick17omg dats sooo sadReply
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  • laurenisdebest 0 laurenisdebesti know!Reply
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  • Exhumed 36 ExhumedWell rather than sitting on your butt writing animal abuse poems why dont you get off your but and doing something
    And lovesick17 learn how to spell please because you speak Liek dis coz yu c@nt speel    Reply
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  • amberdasportstar 0 amberdasportstarwell why dont you get off your butt and instead of insulting other people you try and write a poem, they are not easy!Reply
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  • laurenisdebest 0 laurenisdebestThank You!Reply
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  • laurenisdebest 0 laurenisdebestAnd no one asked you for your oppinion anyway
    overthehedge! Lovesik17, you can spell whatever way you want when your on my blog, and overthedge it is none of your business how people spell on other peoples blogs so just leave her alone    Reply
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  • tiff_duke 0 tiff_dukeyeah overthehedge u spell how u spell things
    and dont insult some1 for doing different

    i spell things different 2
    i put numbers instead of writing the words.instead of one,i write 1 and instead of writing to too or two,i write 2
    instead of writing you or are, i write u or r
    instead of writin.....oh well u get the picture.
    lots of people spell different online    Reply
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  • wendychen072601487 0 wendychen072601487:cry:Reply
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  • amberdasportstar 0 amberdasportstarsome people are sweet
    some people are sour
    overthehedge
    your mean by the hour
    i dont like it when
    people are tough
    but i'll say it now
    I'VE HAD ENOUGH!    Reply
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  • amberdasportstar 0 amberdasportstaranyone like my poemReply
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  • kittykittydaisy 0 kittykittydaisysome people are sweet
    some people are sour
    overthehedge
    your mean by the hour
    i dont like it when
    people are tough
    but i'll say it now
    I'VE HAD ENOUGH!
    ------
    People act as the boss,
    They think they're popular but they're not,
    When they're friends ditch them it's their own loss.
    Telling people how to spell,
    They can write just as well,
    You think your better than everyone else,
    TRY WRITING A POEM YOURSELF!    Reply
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