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orlina

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Emily iss in love <3 ;

15th Aug 2009 19:36

16 years, 11 months & 21 days ago

About Meh :3

30th Jun 2009 04:46

17 years, 1 month & 5 days ago

Sawyur <3

13th Jun 2009 13:40

17 years, 1 month & 22 days ago

Birthday Dates =D

23rd May 2009 03:05

17 years, 2 months & 13 days ago

I have no life.

18th May 2009 11:48

17 years, 2 months & 18 days ago

-->[&Emily];; Best friends ^^

18th Apr 2009 09:03

17 years, 3 months & 17 days ago

Autographs? =3

18th Apr 2009 08:29

17 years, 3 months & 17 days ago

-->[&Emily];; Restock Times ;-;

5th Mar 2009 11:50

17 years & 5 months ago

-->[&Emily];;

22nd Nov 2008 00:20

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-->[&Emily];;

10th Oct 2008 06:19

17 years, 9 months & 25 days ago

orlina 19 Comments

-->[&Emily];;

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 05:41

Attention:
This was writen by me and is copyrighted. the title and story. If you copy any of this, you will get reported.
(c) Orlina
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A 6 Year old's war.
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Intro
It was 3463, World War 5 has been going on for 3 days. This is a story about a little girl named Izzy, and her struggles in life through the war. Izzy is six years old and lives with her parents in sunny Arizona. Her blond hair, and large brown eyes make her mommys princess, and this is her story:

Ch.1
Izzy wakes up, dazed and confused. She feels her drousiness wearing her out, since she couldn't sleep. The sounds of the war continued out all day, day and night. "World war 5 is still going on" she thought, "I hope my daddys alright" A single tear raced through her cheek as she went to the bathroom to brush her teeth. She hasnt seen her daddy since the war started, 3 days ago. Worried, she head down to her kitchen, Mommys making breakfast.
"Good Morning, Iz"
"Hey mommy, howcome the booming is so loud?"
"Its okay the war will be over in no time, come eat your omelete and then we can play until dad comes home from the war"
"Ok mom"

Izzy goes to eat her breakfast quietly,without another word. She could see her moms hand trembling as she handed her the food. She must be worried about dad, too.

"...Mommy" she said, almost in a whisper, her voice cracked
"Yes Iz?"
"When will...when will daddy come home? I miss him."
Her mom stared into her big brown eyes, and said "He will be here in no time, im sure of it! He will stay safe and come back home." Her voice was shaky, though she tried to make it sound as if she believed it too, she wished she had.
"Oh, okay mommy."

Izzy went back to her room to watch TV, and as she turned it on and skipped through the channels to find Nickelodeon, but she passed bye Fox News, the war was on TV. She watched as the reporters talked about the images on the TV, and as they showed people who died. Izzy sat on her bed, restless, as she started crying quietly. "What about my dad? Is he okay? What if i dont see him again? Im only six!" she murmered quitely to herself. Pictures of dead soldiers, and crying torn familys were shown. Izzy then fell asleep. In her dream she saw her dad calling her, telling her it will all be okay, and not to miss him too muc. She woke up from a huge boom outside. On the news the healine said, "Bomb exploded near forks, 40 identified people dead" Izzy started shaking, scared for her dad's life.

Ch.2
Izzy had woken up. Was it all just a dream? Is the war all in her imagination? The TV was still on, and she quickly glanced up at it, scared of what she would see. Just what she had expected, it wasnt just a dream, she had fallen asleep quietly before while watching TV. She turned up the volume and watched as the reporters disapprovingly nodded their heads, and felt remorse for the killed soldiers and their familys. Izzy was sitting with her eyes big, with nothing to say. She saw some clips of the war, and..."MOMMY!!! MOMMY LOOK! DADDY!!" She yelled, breathless.

"IZZY? Whats happening everything alright??"
"Mom! I saw daddy on the TV!"
Her mom looked at the TV, as if a cold sword went through her heart. The banner on the news channel said, 'Killed Identifed Soldiers Pictures and Clips'
She quietly started crying, harder and harder as the clock ticked.
"Mom? Mom whats wrong, arent you happy? We see daddy! I missed him so much!"
Her mom quietly nodded her head, "No Iz, there is something wrong this time...."

Ch.3
COMING OUT SOON CHECK MY BLOG for updates=)

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orlina

ratee it!

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 13:41

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 13:38

orlina

Thanks!! ppleease rate 1-10 i want it to have an /average/ rating

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 13:32

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 13:27

well i thinks this is a gd story

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 13:23

orlina

Zippa thankss for the advice ill go edit it =) And spelling mistakes are okay ill get them all fixed when im on ch 5 =D this is a draft

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 11:18

there is some spelling mistakes in the first and second parrie.

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 07:50

It's pretty good, but I found two errors:
1. You said 'It was 3463, World War 5 has been going on for 3 days.' yet Izzy says '"World war 6...'
2. 'This is a story about a little 4 year old princess named Izzy, and her struggles in life through the war. Izzy is four years old and lives with her parents in Forks.' You have already stated that she is four years old twice.

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 06:37

great story nothing wrong with it

10/10

17 years, 11 months & 2 days ago

2nd Sep 2008 06:11