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Pantherclaw took a step foreward, his claws glinting in the setting sun. "Going to give up yet?" He hissed at Foxtail, who already had a large gash on her shoulder. She herded her 3 kits closer, but one strayed a little too far. There was a flash of claws, and Rabbitkit's squeaks were abruptly cut short. All of the other cats were at the Gathering, so no other cat except for Pantherclaw was there to hear her yowl of anguish. "Run while you still can" He hissed. She hurridly picked up her kits,struggling to carry both of them and ran out of the Thunderclan camp,and into the forest. She stopped at a tree hollow,and crept into the hard, dry hollow. A steady drizzle began to fall, and she licked her kits to give them warmth. Her beautiful emrald geen eyes shone with shock, sadness, rage, and betrayl, she could never return to Thunderclan.



Pantherclaw sneered as he heard the cats returning from the Gathering. He dragged Rabbitkit's body to the middle of camp, and quickly put on a shocked expression. Their leader,Amberstar entered first. He stopped short as he saw the body. "Who did this?" He exclaimed,his voice showing unnamable expressions. Pantherclaw replied,his voice shaking "F-foxtail did.I tried to stop her,but she said an inperfect kit with a stumpy tail didn't deserve to live" He broke into fake sobs. Amberstar went rigid with shock for a second, then murmered "I thought her,above all would not betray me". Foxtail had been his mate,and this was a heavy blow for him. He ran to his den,as the other cats flowed in. Crys of shock and rage rippled across all of Thunderclan as they heard what Pantherclaw had to say.


Meanwhile,Foxtail though miserably about Rabbitkit, and what a warrior he could've been.She nosed her kits, licking the dirt off of their thin fur. One of them,a navy/gray she cat began to mew,confused.She opened her blue eyes andm looked around, wrinkling her nose in distaste at her new surroundings. The other one, Frostkit opened her brown eyes,awakened by her sister Lavanderkit's squeaks. She gave a little jump of surprise,and she too began to mew, her white fur standing up bit. Foxtail purred gently to them, and soon enough they relaxed and suckled themselves to sleep.
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mewstar072 Jul 200828comments
Comments (28)
  • wolfie1234 0 wolfie1234very good story
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Thanks,I love to make of little random storys like this,I put it on a blog s I can use it with warriors RPs
  • neolover458 0 neolover458That's sad Rabbitkit died, DIE PANTHERCLAW! DIE!
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07lol.Should I add onto it?
  • neolover458 0 neolover458Yesh, I want to know more! Will Pantherclaw try to track her down, and why did he drive her out????
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Ok,editing....
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Everyone like my edit part? I'm editing again.....
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Couldn't think of a new edit....mm me if you guys have any ideas!
  • Hadestown 75 HadestownI also have a cat named Pantherclaw =o I don't rp him as much, mainly use him in my stories. Just one thing that really bugged me though was that you didn't space after your punctuation which makes it a bit harder to read. You have some spelling mistakes, noting too major though, just an extra letter here and there. I'm not sure if this is from the middle of something that you are/were writing or if it's the start of something, but if it's the start of the story of whatever, then I think that you need to be a lot more descriptive of the settings, characters etc..BUT if it's from the middle of a story or ..something and you've already provided your reader with enough information then it's fine. :]
  • 0 HiddenVampirei loved it
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Thanks! I'll add more,and fix those mistakes!
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07WHY ISN"Y ANYONE ELSE LEAVING A COMMENT!
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • hounddog2007 0 hounddog2007Jeeze! Gracie, Chill!!!! BTW: Did you know Quent is using Frostkit in Club chat?
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07Who?
  • hounddog2007 0 hounddog2007Sorry! I forgot!!! Quent=Kayli Buzzy=Sammi Toots=Yours truly!!! You want a Nickname?! Ive got a PERFECT one for you...
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07What? Tell me!!!!!!!
  • hounddog2007 0 hounddog2007Fine, you will be Tiara...'The little princess' Kayli didnt like the name 'Tiara' so I gave her a boys name! But DONT tell her!!! Shell KILL me!!!
  • mewstar07 11 mewstar07lol! I like it....unique.and it gives a nice image.I'm gonna go make a siggy for it right now!
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