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johnnybgoode
a dog sits waiting
in the hot midday sun
too faithful to leave
too frightened to run

he???s been there for days now
with nothing to do
but sit by the road
just waiting for you

he can???t understand
why you left him that day
he thought you were stopping
to take him to play

he???s sure you???ll come back
and that???s why he stays
how long can he suffer?
how many more days?

his legs have grown weak
his throat???s parched and dry
he???s sick now from hunger
he falls with a sigh

he lays down his head
and closes his eyes
i wish you could see
how a waiting dog dies

PLEASE TREAT ANIMALS KINDLY
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johnnybgoode21 Sep 200885comments
Comments (85)
  • midnightsky685 0 midnightsky685:cry: :cry: :angry:Reply
  • NeverSayNever01 8 NeverSayNever01Incredible poetry skillsReply
  • eeveeerb 42 eeveeerbyou are very talented. reminds me of "hachi" very sad story, but an excellent tale of love and loyalty.Reply
  • translator 58 translatorThis poem is beautiful. You should really become a published poet, if you are not one already. 😉 xReply
  • MissNora 75 MissNorahow people do thatReply
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